October Girl

until this wensday I think....

hello, well I do like this poem, it's pretty great. But, I did catch some errors. In the fourth staza you wrote i, not I you see? Well that's the ...

(Jessica) I barred my teeth again, and growled deep in my throat, this sound not animal or human, just me. I changed fastly and looked at him with my crazy, ...

(Jessica) I took a step towards the boy, he looked at me with a warm expression. I step catuiously. I was affraid of capture. Something I didn't want. I made ...

*yes thank you ^_^*** (Jessica) I ran through the woods and came to an abrupt stop...

This is very good for you being a new member and all, but I feel like you some how forced the ryme. Which is a shame because all together it ...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rub

I'm reading a new book by Stephanie Myer called The Host I like it so far. :D

***Amber if your talking about the boy running into me, I'm in were-cat form ^_6 just thought you should know.****

Hello Amber, I have a piece like this in my portfolio as well, ecept yours seems to be about a lover or a friend. Mine is about my brother and ...

Hello, (yes it's in the right place) what to say aboout this piece? Hmm, let's start off with, what was I suppose to feel behind it? Hurt, betrayel, love? I ...

HELLO! ***giggles***

***someone bring me in whenever you can***

(Jesssica) The sound of a bullet tore throgh her ear. She woke up in a sweat. She felt weird, like she shouldn't be alive. She immeaditly saw a mansion in ...

Hmm, too short to really crit. But, I'll do my best. Um, well it didn't seem to flow to me, please edit it and find the right words. It sounds ...